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When career tramps, a yachtsman and an ex-actress team up swindling the jet set, revenge threatens when his ex-wife arrives working undercover for the IRS
When his ex-wife shows up in south beach, a career grifter and his partner's plan to con billionaire twins is jeopardized unless he can find a way to get rid of her.
When his ex-wife shows up in south beach, a career grifter and his partner’s plan to con billionaire twins is jeopardized unless he can find a way to get rid of her.
See lessTwo career tramps, a yachtsman and an ex-actress, falling in love team up and live swindling the jet set ? but they risk losing it all when yachtsman?s ex-wife comes undercover for an IRS sting
I'd drop 'career tramps'. ?Tramps tends to bring about images of homeless and this conflicts with the jetset image. Otherwise I can see your movie. ?Perhaps ground it in a time and place. ?Specific details can be a friend. ?You could even drop the detail about their relationship. Saves some words, gRead more
I’d drop ‘career tramps’. ?Tramps tends to bring about images of homeless and this conflicts with the jetset image.
Otherwise I can see your movie. ?Perhaps ground it in a time and place. ?Specific details can be a friend. ?You could even drop the detail about their relationship.
Saves some words, give you more room for story. ?Unlike my fellow reviewers I don’t see the need for likable characters. ?I think compelling characters are more important than likable people. ?Remember the logline is the shortest path through your story in the most interesting and engage path.
Character development etc is for your treatment or synopsis.
Try this (less than 30 words).
‘A yachtsman and an ex-actress, live the high life swindling the jet set, but danger arrives in the form of his ex-wife working undercover for the IRS.’
See lessWhen a recluse yachtsman gets charmed by an ex actress he discovers she is a career tramp just like him. Teaming up they mingle and swindle the jet set living the high-life until recluses ex returns to renew love and revenge as an undercover IRS sting
Think there's a little too much setup and no motivation, a recluse tends not to mingle. A man and his ex-celebrity actress lover live swindling the Jetset until his ex-girlfriend reappears as part of an IRS sting. Plus IRS may be the wrong agency, swindles normally don't attract Tax issues as much aRead more
Think there’s a little too much setup and no motivation, a recluse tends not to mingle.
A man and his ex-celebrity actress lover live swindling the Jetset until his ex-girlfriend reappears as part of an IRS sting.
Plus IRS may be the wrong agency, swindles normally don’t attract Tax issues as much as they would Police attention.
Hope this helps.
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