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A career tramp turned conman has to save his loot and prison-time when his ex-wife comes undercover to help IRS nab him
I think Foxtrot25 is on to something. ?It might make for a more interesting story if the ex-wife were the protagonist when the IRS asks her to be the bait to catch her con artist husband. Recluse: Given the number of times you've posted on this premise, it seems that you're much attracted to the "caRead more
I think Foxtrot25 is on to something. ?It might make for a more interesting story if the ex-wife were the protagonist when the IRS asks her to be the bait to catch her con artist husband.
Recluse: Given the number of times you’ve posted on this premise, it seems that you’re much attracted to the “career tramp”, ex-con. Okay, but the problem is, none of the versions give us a reason to be attracted to him as the protagonist. ?Why should we not want him ?to be brought to justice, serve hard time for his crimes?
Just saying.
See lessA soldier returns home with a Bronze Star, a Purple Heart, and a desire to become a professional high stakes poker player, believing it is a safer lifestyle. So she thought.
Was there a specific event that made him want to become a poker player? If so, that would make for the inciting incident and needs to be described, if not you need to come up with an event that would logically motivate him to want to play poker. Perhaps he needs a large amount of money for a good caRead more
Was there a specific event that made him want to become a poker player? If so, that would make for the inciting incident and needs to be described, if not you need to come up with an event that would logically motivate him to want to play poker. Perhaps he needs a large amount of money for a good cause and is also a good poker player, now he must become one for the cause, whatever it may be.
See lessWhen Western men suspiciously die in an peaceful Asian country the US counts as a key ally, an inexperienced American Embassy security official ruffles diplomatic feathers by claiming the country’s first serial killer has emerged and is probably an American.
After a murder a US diploma starts an incident by suggesting there is an American serial killer operating in Asia. This is an incident. But what is the story? What happens before and after is the story. Tell us that.
After a murder a US diploma starts an incident by suggesting there is an American serial killer operating in Asia.
This is an incident. But what is the story? What happens before and after is the story. Tell us that.
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