Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
A suspended detective confronts his long-buried past investigating an unsolved murder that forces him to face himself, to his end or a cathartic answer for the murder girl and himself.
Agreed with the above - the inciting incident is not clear and lacks a strong element of motivation.Also, best to stay away from vague descriptions such as "...confronts his long-buried past..." and "...forces him to face himself..." as they lack detail they fail to inform the reader about the plot.
Agreed with the above – the inciting incident is not clear and lacks a strong element of motivation.
Also, best to stay away from vague descriptions such as “…confronts his long-buried past…” and “…forces him to face himself…” as they lack detail they fail to inform the reader about the plot.
See lessAfter cops investigating space piracy are publicly killed, the Homicide Detective must solve the piracy case before the murderer kills him or his family
There are a few fundamental elements that are unclear about this concept: What does "...publicly killed..." mean? Is the detective investigating the killing of the cops or deaths resulting from the piracy? Why must he solve the piracy case?
There are a few fundamental elements that are unclear about this concept:
What does “…publicly killed…” mean?
Is the detective investigating the killing of the cops or deaths resulting from the piracy?
Why must he solve the piracy case?
See lessAfter a space piracy witness and two cops are publicly murdered, the Senior Investigator must escape from the murderer and solve the piracy case before his family or more cops are killed
What is the setting for this adventure? Is it contained on a spacecraft somewhere? Cause then we can begin with murders occuring there and our investigator is contained with the murderer in that space -- makes things more dangerous that way.
What is the setting for this adventure? Is it contained on a spacecraft somewhere? Cause then we can begin with murders occuring there and our investigator is contained with the murderer in that space — makes things more dangerous that way.
See less