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A young black man accidentally travels to the past. He is decided to save his great-grandmother, a slave, with the help of her owner’s son
What are the obstacles and/or outcomes. Time travel is always tricky. Travelling back in time a young black man attempts to save his slave great grandmother but.... forcing him to .... That sort of thing. I do like the idea.
What are the obstacles and/or outcomes. Time travel is always tricky.
Travelling back in time a young black man attempts to save his slave great grandmother but…. forcing him to ….
That sort of thing. I do like the idea.
See lessOne lonely Filipino seafarer in a cruise ship finds comfort to his roommate who saves money for his wedding but he unexpectedly falls for him, and as they sail together his feelings grow deeper until he’s force to reveal it.
I can see a concept, but I can't see a logline with the needed elements. Discovering your own identity can be part of your characters dramatic need. But you want him to have some kind of visual goal as well in order to visualize the story. Preparing for a wedding is one point you make. What does thaRead more
I can see a concept, but I can’t see a logline with the needed elements.
See lessDiscovering your own identity can be part of your characters dramatic need. But you want him to have some kind of visual goal as well in order to visualize the story.
Preparing for a wedding is one point you make. What does that mean? Too vague.
The other point is attempting suicide. How does this reflect the direction of your story?
In the aftermath of a school shooting, the perpetrator’s loner best friend becomes a romantically involved with a popular girl who was injured in the incident. Their relationship is put to the test when he is forced to testify at an inquest that he had foreknowledge of the tragedy.
It's an interesting dramatic problem. But the impact of his testimony extends far beyond his relationship with a popular girl. Also at risk is the relationship with his family. And he is in serious legal trouble, too. And it would seem that his romantic relationship pivots on how she reacts to his cRead more
It’s an interesting dramatic problem. But the impact of his testimony extends far beyond his relationship with a popular girl. Also at risk is the relationship with his family. And he is in serious legal trouble, too.
And it would seem that his romantic relationship pivots on how she reacts to his confession. He can’t dictate how he wants her to feel about him; he can’t make her love him. It’s her call, her decision as to whether to continue the relationship or break it off. In other words, she is in the driver’s seat of that plot thread.
So if you want to write a script that focuses on their relationship more than other aspect than I suggest consider writing (and loglining) if from her point of view.
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