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  1. Posted: August 7, 2020In: Drama

    After a family friend of her dies unexpectedly of cancer, a nanny’s life goes on a downward spiral struggles with alcoholism while raising a young girl whom she adopted.

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    Added an answer on August 7, 2020 at 9:30 pm

    Did not understand the purpose of the nanny. Is the young girl daughter of family friend for whom the nanny wants to protect and bring up as a good citizen? Also did not understand the conflict .. does the adopted girl not like the nanny or are there any other external challenges? Mostly did not undRead more

    Did not understand the purpose of the nanny. Is the young girl daughter of family friend for whom the nanny wants to protect and bring up as a good citizen?
    Also did not understand the conflict .. does the adopted girl not like the nanny or are there any other external challenges?
    Mostly did not understand the connection between death of a family friend and the adopted young girl if there is any.

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  2. Posted: August 5, 2020In: Drama

    When her brother suddenly dies, an anxiety prone sister is forced to hatch an elaborate scheme to conceal the tragedy from her suspicious mother who stops at nothing to unravel the truth.

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    Added an answer on August 6, 2020 at 7:21 am

    Who is the protagonist, the sister or the mother? Who is the pov character? Is there anything about the tragedy that intensifies the need for the sister to cover up the death? Like the son died while doing something that will bring shame and disgrace upon the family.

    Who is the protagonist, the sister or the mother? Who is the pov character?

    Is there anything about the tragedy that intensifies the need for the sister to cover up the death? Like the son died while doing something that will bring shame and disgrace upon the family.

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  3. Posted: July 9, 2020In: Drama

    One lonely Filipino seafarer in a cruise ship unexpectedly falls in love to his roommate but rejects him, as they sail together to Caribbean he attempts to commit suicide to end his depression.

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    Added an answer on July 30, 2020 at 5:37 pm

    Great. So our Seafarer is lonely. Good place to start psychologically, as our general assumptions are seafarers spend a great deal of time lone, at sea. Story Challenge: why might such a lonely man have have made such a isolating career choice - given it's so lonely out at sea? Still the question ofRead more

    Great. So our Seafarer is lonely. Good place to start psychologically, as our general assumptions are seafarers spend a great deal of time lone, at sea.

    Story Challenge: why might such a lonely man have have made such a isolating career choice – given it’s so lonely out at sea?

    Still the question of gender remains? Recognise the importance of identity politics, but “he” -> falls in love with … Who? The value of this question is that of describing Villain – surely the best part of story development. Suggestion: Think maybe ‘Film Noir’ …. that is if the villain is female.

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