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As their lives begin to fall apart, an alcoholic bar supply salesman helps his best friend, an MMA fighter, chase his childhood dream to play music at a storied Austin, Texas venue.
Because the MMA fighter is the character with the goal, it seems that he would be the likely lead character, if that is the case the logline should be written from his perspective. However, if the alcoholic bar supply salesman is the lead character then this version is fine.
Because the MMA fighter is the character with the goal, it seems that he would be the likely lead character, if that is the case the logline should be written from his perspective.
However, if the alcoholic bar supply salesman is the lead character then this version is fine.
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You have the inkling of a good concept here, but your logline lacks an actual plot as it reads more like an ad or teaser. Make sure it is clear who your protagonist is, what he wants, what's in the way and what action is taken to achieve his goal.
You have the inkling of a good concept here, but your logline lacks an actual plot as it reads more like an ad or teaser. Make sure it is clear who your protagonist is, what he wants, what’s in the way and what action is taken to achieve his goal.
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An inciting incident should not be 20 years old, Also a lead character should have a goal.
An inciting incident should not be 20 years old, Also a lead character should have a goal.
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