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An aging drug addict’s life changed when his granddaughter who aged out of foster care comes for a visit.
"When his granddaughter ages out of foster care, an aging drug addict fights to get clean so he can be the grandfather he never was or thought he could be."
“When his granddaughter ages out of foster care, an aging drug addict fights to get clean so he can be the grandfather he never was or thought he could be.”
See lessA high school student becomes an unwitting pawn in a game between two teachers, and she must find a way to outwit them in order for her to get accepted to university.
What game are the teachers playing? How is it related to a student's being accepted elsewhere? How can she outwit others when she's unwitting? You're describing a conflict without actually telling us what the story is about. It has to be clear, simple, and compelling. Do it without commas to punch iRead more
What game are the teachers playing? How is it related to a student’s being accepted elsewhere? How can she outwit others when she’s unwitting?
You’re describing a conflict without actually telling us what the story is about. It has to be clear, simple, and compelling. Do it without commas to punch it up and keep it flowing forward.
See lessWhen a self proclaimed DJ chases after power and notoriety, with the help of her best friend and mentor, she must try to keep her thrown in tact from the enviousness of another DJ even if that means going beyond her moral beliefs.
Sounds good. Wonder if you can shorten it. Maybe leave out the middle piece between the commas. And add some detail about the moral challenge.
Sounds good. Wonder if you can shorten it. Maybe leave out the middle piece between the commas. And add some detail about the moral challenge.
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