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A meteralistic business man enters THE TOWER which can only be entered at the bottom and existed at the top. He must quickly learn the rules of THE TOWER if he ever wants to see the outside world again.
A very important element is missing from this logline. That is, 'the lead character's goal' What does the businessman hope to achieve by entering the tower? And what event stets the story into motion? Here is a logline attempt, however, mine is a little long, and had to guess at some stuff, but I hoRead more
A very important element is missing from this logline. That is, ‘the lead character’s goal’
What does the businessman hope to achieve by entering the tower?
And what event stets the story into motion?
Here is a logline attempt, however, mine is a little long, and had to guess at some stuff, but I hope it helps:
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“When he discovers his business is about to go under, a materialistic businessman enters THE TOWER; a deadly seven-floor maze, if he succeeds, he will receive enough wealth to save his business, but if he fails he will lose out on all the things he is just now realizing are truly important.”
A crotchety old man goes to no end to get into Mexico with eight hundred thousand dollars in stolen money. He is faced with outwitting A deranged killer, Law enforcement, and a con woman.
Leaning towards: “A crotchety old thief must outwit a deranged killer, a rogue cop, and a con woman in order to escape to Mexico with 800,000 dollars” I took some liberties with your nebulous “law enforcement” — you get the idea. Consider a holy grail amount of stolen money to up the stakes. Make thRead more
Leaning towards:
“A crotchety old thief must outwit a deranged killer, a rogue cop, and a con woman in order to escape to Mexico with 800,000 dollars”
I took some liberties with your nebulous “law enforcement” — you get the idea.
Consider a holy grail amount of stolen money to up the stakes.
Make this yours, keep going!
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Sounds great. I see it like Rocky 5, where he doesn't wanna fight and it ends up a street brawl.
Sounds great. I see it like Rocky 5, where he doesn’t wanna fight and it ends up a street brawl.
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