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A reluctant psychic’s near death experience reveals that soul families are trapped in karmic loops and unless she finds the strength to confront her narcissistic mother by using her psychic abilities to find their past life mistakes they will remain trapped reliving the same life and death experiences for eternity. 0 Reply Share
Good concept and your logline hits the necessary beats, but imo the sentence is just a little bit hard to read. I would consider rewording and/or cleaning up everything after "unless she finds the strength" I also think wording like "she must" would be a little clearer and eliminate unnecessary verbRead more
Good concept and your logline hits the necessary beats, but imo the sentence is just a little bit hard to read. I would consider rewording and/or cleaning up everything after “unless she finds the strength”
See lessI also think wording like “she must” would be a little clearer and eliminate unnecessary verbage.
When a climate activist with low self-esteem learns the new mayor will turn their experimental eco-metropolis into a foreign trade capital, she mobilizes a citizen eco-force to protect this Shangri-La. She fails, but ends up birthing a global sustainability revolution in which she’s the new leader.
You shouldn't give away the ending in the logline.
You shouldn’t give away the ending in the logline.
See lessA dog makes his way back home to his owner after they’re separated in a bombing during the Korean War.
Dig it! A Homeward Bound premise set in the Korean War. To pull me in as a reader: Any special characteristics concerning the dog? Anything unique to the landscape of the Korean War that the dog must cross to up the stakes? Take care.
Dig it! A Homeward Bound premise set in the Korean War.
To pull me in as a reader:
Any special characteristics concerning the dog?
Anything unique to the landscape of the Korean War that the dog must cross to up the stakes?
Take care.
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