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On the anniversary of her husband’s death a widower’s life outlook is called into question by the arrival of her husband’s blind friend.
What is her life outlook? Bleak? That would give a hint at why it's called into question. Also, maybe "challenged" is better than called into question. More action and conflict oriented. Is there a reason the friend is blind? Does that have bearing on the story? Is there a romantic correlation betweRead more
What is her life outlook? Bleak? That would give a hint at why it’s called into question. Also, maybe “challenged” is better than called into question. More action and conflict oriented.
Is there a reason the friend is blind? Does that have bearing on the story?
Is there a romantic correlation between the two? If so, I think hinting at that could also be good to get the audience interested.
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Example: “A free-spirited young woman falls for a middle-aged executive when hitching a ride across the Golden Gate Bridge” Opposites attract but what is her goal? Consider the man interjecting a dilemma that tests it? Hope this helps, take care.
Example:
“A free-spirited young woman falls for a middle-aged executive when hitching a ride across the Golden Gate Bridge”
Opposites attract but what is her goal? Consider the man interjecting a dilemma that tests it?
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A small village boy, who is living a meaningless life, finds himself in a friendship with a mysterious dragon and embarks on a series of challenges from a sadistic entity to cement his place in life.
Consider the following: Formula: A [CHARACTER], must [do the ACTION/GOAL] when [a MAJOR EVENT occurs]. Example: “A simple village boy embarks on a [show don’t tell “series of challenges” that lead to a goal] with an enigmatic dragon when [a sadistic entity causes a MAJOR EVENT]” Hope this helps, makRead more
Consider the following:
Formula: A [CHARACTER], must [do the ACTION/GOAL] when [a MAJOR EVENT occurs].
Example:
“A simple village boy embarks on a [show don’t tell “series of challenges” that lead to a goal] with an enigmatic dragon when [a sadistic entity causes a MAJOR EVENT]”
Hope this helps, make this yours.
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