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A teenage girl struggles to deal with everyday life on a planet populated by aliens.
The logline sets up a situation for a plot -- but it doesn't set up a plot. ?Check out "Training" at the top of the web page for guidelines for writing a logline that describes a plot.
The logline sets up a situation for a plot — but it doesn’t set up a plot. ?Check out “Training” at the top of the web page for guidelines for writing a logline that describes a plot.
See lessThree days before Armageddon, a drug addicted lawyer struggles to be free from his addiction, his friends and his day job .The devil has marked him, he has made a claim .To survive the Dreadful war he has to beat him at this final hour.
Agreed with the above comments. Also the premise is confusing - how does he know that Armageddon is three days away? Is he the only one that knows or do all people know?? Why not just set it during Armageddon instead? Lastly best to describe exactly how one beats the devil himself, this sounds implaRead more
Agreed with the above comments.
Also the premise is confusing – how does he know that Armageddon is three days away? Is he the only one that knows or do all people know?? Why not just set it during Armageddon instead?
Lastly best to describe exactly how one beats the devil himself, this sounds implausible according to mainstream theology. Perhaps best if he needs to banish the devil not beat him.
See lessOut on his own for the first time with no family or support, a mentally-challenged man with impulse control problems must overcome his limitations and face a series of cruel and indifferent characters as he chases his dream of a “normal” life.
I kind of remember this logline, and it still makes me think of Bad Boy Bubby (http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0106341/). I join the previous comments when they said that it's too vague, it lacks specificity. Your logline could apply to Bad Boy Bubby and Beign There (where a simple minded gardener who sRead more
I kind of remember this logline, and it still makes me think of Bad Boy Bubby (http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0106341/). I join the previous comments when they said that it’s too vague, it lacks specificity. Your logline could apply to Bad Boy Bubby and Beign There (where a simple minded gardener who spent all the life in a garden explores the outside world after his master’s death).
See lessI think this archetype of the fool can still generate excellent movies, including your movie: you “just” have to make some creative decisions and nail the main elements in a coherent and original structure.