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When a mega strip joint threatens his and his dead wife?s grave plot, a terminally ill war vet takes a ruthless realtor to Supreme Court to halt construction.
When a mega strip development threatens his and his dead wife?s grave plot, a terminally ill vet takes the ruthless realtor to court to halt construction. (26 words) Like Richiev said. ?This would be a more interesting story if it is ?based on a real case that went all the way to the U.S. Supreme CoRead more
When a mega strip development threatens his and his dead wife?s grave plot, a terminally ill vet takes the ruthless realtor to court to halt construction.
(26 words)
Like Richiev said. ?This would be a more interesting story if it is ?based on a real case that went all the way to the U.S. Supreme Court. ?And the only way it could get that far is if it involves a Constitutional issue. ?Otherwise, realistically, it will never get heard above the state courts which is why I dropped the reference to the Supremes.
But if it’s not based upon a real case and ?you know of some arcane legal issue in the premise that would credibly rise to the level of a Constitutional question, then run with it.
See lessA lawsuit for his wife?s injury offers a homeless group leader a ticket out? until a member of his flock threatens to testify. Now he must resort to extreme measure to stop him.
torgodog: The logline has certainly morphed ?from the ?original posting, version 1.0. ?Obviously, you want to "chew on the bone" of homelessness. ?Why? ? What is the central issue about homelessness that you want to explore?
torgodog:
The logline has certainly morphed ?from the ?original posting, version 1.0. ?Obviously, you want to “chew on the bone” of homelessness. ?Why? ? What is the central issue about homelessness that you want to explore?
See lessA war torn soldier riddled with guilt and PTSD must face his mind, and his mental image of himself only to fail when the guilt of him killing an innocent woman gets the better of him.
What is the character's objective goal? As a movie/tv show, we cannot see into his head to tell that is facing his mind. We need a goal we can see. "him killing an innocent woman gets the better of him." This seems to be what the story is about. What does him killing this woman cause him to do? DoesRead more
What is the character’s objective goal? As a movie/tv show, we cannot see into his head to tell that is facing his mind. We need a goal we can see. “him killing an innocent woman gets the better of him.” This seems to be what the story is about. What does him killing this woman cause him to do? Does he want to evade the police? Does he want to find her family so he can apologize? What is his objective goal?
See lessThen, what does he do to reach his goal?
Example: When a soldier suffering PTSD finds a letter on a woman he accidentally kills, he follows the letter’s instructions to return a pendant to its owner.
He has a clear goal in this example, to return the pendant. How? He follows the letter’s instructions.