1. Posted: July 6, 2016In:

    An opera singer suffering from throat cancer lands in a gig with drug addict and very strict musician who would always push her to sing aloud.

    Jaspreet Singh Penpusher

    Guys thanks for your comments it really helps :-)

    Guys thanks for your comments it really helps 🙂

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  2. Posted: July 6, 2016In:

    A successful, careless and drug addict DJ falls in love with a female singer who is about to get married with one of club owner where DJ works.

    Neer Shelter Singularity

    Agreed with the above. Also I suggest trimming down the main character descriptions - he's successful, carless and drug addicted, but which is the most relevant to the story, or more to the point, his journey of learning and change as a character?

    Agreed with the above.

    Also I suggest trimming down the main character descriptions – he’s successful, carless and drug addicted, but which is the most relevant to the story, or more to the point, his journey of learning and change as a character?

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  3. Posted: July 1, 2016In:

    A street stupid teen struggles to sell methamphetamine looted from a crimescene to fund his dream of making it big in Hollywood, as he’s pursued by a psychopath cop.

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    benny Logliner

    Thanks Dkpough1. I agree that a time out will be a good idea. I was heading along that line anyway. I had a quick scan of my script this morning and I've come to the conclusion that I've put so much thought into the range of characters that I may just have neglected getting to know my MC. I have a bRead more

    Thanks Dkpough1.
    I agree that a time out will be a good idea. I was heading along that line anyway. I had a quick scan of my script this morning and I’ve come to the conclusion that I’ve put so much thought into the range of characters that I may just have neglected getting to know my MC. I have a bad habit of working backwards. I agree with all of your comments.

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