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  1. Posted: August 12, 2016In: Drama

    Relationship between the group of friends change as they take trip to Vegas.

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    Added an answer on August 14, 2016 at 12:53 pm

    It is not bad but you need more as to how it changes, why vegas? Remind me of:Oil and Vinegar (1987) After John Hughes?s death in 2009, details on a lost project of his surfaced in the comments section of aVanity Fair piece about his life. Filmmaker Alan Metter, who directed Rodney Dangerfield?s BacRead more

    It is not bad but you need more as to how it changes, why vegas? Remind me of:Oil and Vinegar (1987)
    After John Hughes?s death in 2009, details on a lost project of his surfaced in the comments section of aVanity Fair piece about his life. Filmmaker Alan Metter, who directed Rodney Dangerfield?s Back to School, posted to describe a time that he passed up directing a movie written by John Hughes:

    ?John Hughes and I had the same agent. One day he called and sent over a script John had written and wanted me to direct (it was during the period when there were two John Hughes films being made each year, one he directed and the other he wrote and produced). It was about a guy (Mathew Broderick?) driving across the country on the way to his wedding. He picks up a girl hitchhiking (Molly Ringwald?) and they wind up in a moral dilemma, stranded in a motel room in the middle of nowhere, talking all night about every single thing that?s important to anyone coming of age. Like Breakfast Club it was a magnificent dialogue piece ? a cinematic play. I turned it down because no matter who directed John?s annual ?B? film, it was a John Hughes film. A year earlier my movie, Back To School, had opened the same weekend as Ferris Bueller and beat it at the box office. I didn?t want to take a back seat to John Hughes now. So this great John Hughes movie never got made. And I was never offered a script this good again. I never even got to meet the man. As career moves go, this was the greatest mistake of my life. Maybe someone will dig it up and be smart enough to make one last John Hughes film.? ? Filmmaker Alan Metter, 2009.

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  2. Posted: August 11, 2016In: Drama

    Faced with his impending death, a middle-aged slacker takes on a series of odd jobs to earn enough money to afford a plot in a prestigious memorial park while trying to make amends with the woman he shouldn’t have let go.

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    Added an answer on August 12, 2016 at 12:27 pm

    I actually like the plot about earning enough money for a grave, (Especially if the grave plot is beside someone he loves) I haven't seen that movie. I have seen movies about people trying to make amends with someone they love. I would focus on the 'grave' plot in the logline and keep the other plotRead more

    I actually like the plot about earning enough money for a grave, (Especially if the grave plot is beside someone he loves) I haven’t seen that movie.

    I have seen movies about people trying to make amends with someone they love.

    I would focus on the ‘grave’ plot in the logline and keep the other plotline for the script.

    But that is just me.

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  3. Posted: August 7, 2016In: Drama

    Formerly a gang member, when a gunfight paralyzes an aspiring cook’s hands, she resorts to preparing scalding-hot entrees with her feet to accomplish her dream of becoming a gourmet chef.

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    Added an answer on August 7, 2016 at 10:54 pm

    Hmm. ?How ?plausible is it to be paralyzed in one's hands after an injury -- but not the feet? Have you studied up on the levels of paralysis as a result of spinal cord injuries (C1-C8, T1-T12, S1-S5)? Is this paralysis premise really medically possible?

    Hmm. ?How ?plausible is it to be paralyzed in one’s hands after an injury — but not the feet? Have you studied up on the levels of paralysis as a result of spinal cord injuries (C1-C8, T1-T12, S1-S5)? Is this paralysis premise really medically possible?

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