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  1. Posted: August 18, 2016In: Drama

    An intelligent but unsuccessful father must save his kids from terrorist who think that he is a Superhero.

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    Added an answer on August 20, 2016 at 10:32 am

    Himanshu: I've pondered your logline for a while and am still unsure about how the underlying logic of the premise plays out. ?What is the theme you are exploring? ?What is the emotional payoff ?-- what do you want the audience to think and feel after seeing the film?

    Himanshu:

    I’ve pondered your logline for a while and am still unsure about how the underlying logic of the premise plays out. ?What is the theme you are exploring? ?What is the emotional payoff ?– what do you want the audience to think and feel after seeing the film?

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  2. Posted: August 17, 2016In: Drama

    A struggling poet returns home to care for his terminally ill sister but conflicts arise again with his overbearing and domineering mother.

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    What does him being a poet have to do with the story? Maybe his mother cut him out of the family because of his "unconventional" career choice and after ten years calls him to come and see his sister?

    What does him being a poet have to do with the story? Maybe his mother cut him out of the family because of his “unconventional” career choice and after ten years calls him to come and see his sister?

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  3. Posted: August 18, 2016In: Drama

    When he receives his visa to the US, a struggling poet returns back home to resolve issues with his overbearing mother and confront the death of his terminally ill sister before departing his country.

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    Added an answer on August 19, 2016 at 2:44 am

    When he receives his visa to the US, a struggling poet returns home, to resolve his issues with his overbearing mother and the death of his terminally ill sister. There he grows and is able to write one of his best poems. (how's this?

    When he receives his visa to the US, a struggling poet returns home, to resolve his issues with his overbearing mother and the death of his terminally ill sister. There he grows and is able to write one of his best poems. (how’s this?

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