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A migrant worker has to return back home unexpectedly after 5 years to look after his child when he finds out his wife has eloped with a stranger and all his savings. On the quest while finding his wife, he finds out that the child actually is not his own son.
What was the article? A headline could be a good starting point for your logline. Thing of your logline as a subtitle for your movie.
What was the article? A headline could be a good starting point for your logline. Thing of your logline as a subtitle for your movie.
See lessA good father and respected police officer is prisoned after he accidentally shot a young child, who was in the driving away robber?s car. He is trying to get his life back with a support of citizens of his city.
Even though by now it doesn't really matter, I'm not exactly sure about your points. The point of my posts was that cops can shoot whomever they please and then get a paid vacation, they have very little accountability these days. Of course, there are those who are convicted, and those who do go toRead more
Even though by now it doesn’t really matter, I’m not exactly sure about your points. The point of my posts was that cops can shoot whomever they please and then get a paid vacation, they have very little accountability these days. Of course, there are those who are convicted, and those who do go to trial, ?but the vast majority of cases do not end that way.
Mainly, I’m not sure where you got ?” innocent cops, just trying to do their job with decency and fairness, ?(and they do exist, lots of them) ?should not be condemned or punished for the crimes of the bad ones.” because the only thing I said was that cops who DO kill someone should be held accountable.
I’m not completely sure how you mean it’s going against common perception. I mean, a cop pursued a criminal, accidentally kills a child, and then is imprisoned for it. Perhaps a bit unfairly? Depends on how harsh the sentence is, but I see nothing that really does what you say.
And yes, what country is it?
See lessAfter being imprisoned for a crime she didn’t commit, a young Christian Performer struggles against self doubt to find a way to use music to unite the prisoners and prove that God is her redeemer.
It's a potentially interesting story on a religious theme, but for the purpose of a logline you need to focus on her most important ?dramatic problem, the central conflict that motivates her objective goal.So what is her ?most important ?dramatic problem? ?Is it: #1-Self-doubt #2-the need to unite pRead more
It’s a potentially interesting story on a religious theme, but for the purpose of a logline you need to focus on her most important ?dramatic problem, the central conflict that motivates her objective goal.
So what is her ?most important ?dramatic problem? ?Is it:
#1-Self-doubt
#2-the need to unite prisoners through music
#3-prove to them that God is her redeemer.
And as a result of the ONE most important dramatic problem what becomes her ONE objective goal?
What is the nature of her self-doubt? ?About her own faith, her own salvation? ?Or her ability to witness to and convert others?
I’m not sure how #2 works out dramatically. ?And what’s at stake if she fails. ? And I don’t understand why she must prove to someone else that God is her redeemer.?Isn’t faith the assurance of things hoped for — not the assurance in the belief other people hold? ?
Nor do I apprehend what is at stake for her if she fails. ?She’s not damned just because she can’t convince others of her own spiritual conviction, right? ?So what’s at stake?
Also why can’t she be guilty of what she’s sentenced for? ?This would enable a character arc of moral redemption. ? As it is, the logline seems to?set up??a character whose problem is more about other people than ?about herself, her own desperate need to redeem herself.
fwiw
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