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  1. Posted: September 9, 2016In: Drama

    When his daughter’s rape-homicide case turns cold, a child psychologist gradually befriends a rehabbing pedophile (the prime suspect) to solicit his trust and a confession.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on September 10, 2016 at 4:11 am

    Recluse's polish is an improvement. But why would a pedophile engage in rehab with the father of his victim? ?Or ever confess?

    Recluse’s polish is an improvement.

    But why would a pedophile engage in rehab with the father of his victim? ?Or ever confess?

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2016In: Drama

    A white racist has a week to find & then bring her deceased grandfather’s secret black family to attend the reading of the will.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on September 8, 2016 at 1:53 pm

    In the last draft of the logline the stakes seem skewed - if she fails to achieve her goal a good thing happens. So society as a whole stands to gain if she fails, as money goes to charity. More to the point, her goal is utterly superficial and selfish - she's trying to prevent money from going to cRead more

    In the last draft of the logline the stakes seem skewed – if she fails to achieve her goal a good thing happens.

    So society as a whole stands to gain if she fails, as money goes to charity. More to the point, her goal is utterly superficial and selfish – she’s trying to prevent money from going to charity, and put it in to her own pocket. We want her to fail,? and she’s a white supremacist to boot!
    Why, oh why, would the audience give her the time of day, or night, and care about her story – she’s not an anti hero, she’s outright unlikable.

    Best to change her goal and motivation, she can be a racist but her reasons for change and motivation to take action need to relate to her flaw, be personal and not superficial.

    What if the inciting incident is her discovery that she has a black half brother. Then she sets out to dispel him as family, but finds he is actually a great guy, who just so happen to be poverty stricken and destitute. They develop a sibling relationship and she changes her racist opinions as a result – make it about the human experience as appose to about money.

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2016In: Drama

    After the suicide of one of the Gonzo Girls during a live taping of their variety show, the remaining members hire a crew to document their road trip across America against their networks wishes. The girls plan to air their piece about the millennial lifestyle on Sweeps Week with or without their producers? approval.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on September 7, 2016 at 10:44 pm

    Why do the Gonzo Girls want to document a road trip after the suicide of on of their members? ?What is the cause-and-effect link between the suicide and the road show? ?Are they exploiting the publicity of the suicide ?to enhance their ratings, to advance their own careers and celebrity status? ?IfRead more

    Why do the Gonzo Girls want to document a road trip after the suicide of on of their members? ?What is the cause-and-effect link between the suicide and the road show? ?Are they exploiting the publicity of the suicide ?to enhance their ratings, to advance their own careers and celebrity status? ?If so, that seems callous and selfish, hardly the way to induce an audience to invest their time and money to watch, imho.

    Also, what’s ?at risk in this scenario? ?What are the stake? ?Why should?we care, root for them to succeed?

    And is it realistic that they can air their piece over the objections of the producer? ?Maybe they can pirate a copy of the video to YouTube but if the network opposes it, it isn’t going on air on the network. ?Or is that the producer opposes and the network supports them? ?In any event, so what? ?Again, what’s at stake? ?Why should a ?viewing audience care, want to root for them to succeed?

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