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A 17 year old punk, with dreams of becoming a professional MMA fighter, comes to terms with his rage, while looking after a deaf blind boy in a rough underclass community.
A seventeen year old punk on the verge of?throwing his life away must prove to his MMA coach? he can handle his rage when he's forced to look after a pain in the ass deaf blind boy in the rough community of Brownsville NY
A seventeen year old punk on the verge of?throwing his life away must prove to his MMA coach? he can handle his rage when he’s forced to look after a pain in the ass deaf blind boy in the rough community of Brownsville NY
See lessAn unemployed mother works hard to get an honorable job as a zookeeper, but then finds herself at the center of an ethical conflict between a zoo and an unorthodox shelter for wildlife.
Is it absolutely important for us to know that she is unemployed? Obviously it won't matter anymore seeing as how she gets the job. ?I am also not clear on who the antagonist: is it her employer (the zoo)? Or is it another zoo and the shelter? I would write it like this: "An inexperienced zookeeperRead more
Is it absolutely important for us to know that she is unemployed? Obviously it won’t matter anymore seeing as how she gets the job. ?I am also not clear on who the antagonist: is it her employer (the zoo)? Or is it another zoo and the shelter?
I would write it like this:
“An inexperienced zookeeper must fight for animal rights when she discovers unethical practices from her new employer and a shelter before a rare elephant is killed”
See lessTwo friend’s relationship turns hostile after one of them reveals their love for the other.
If this is a story about two guys who are friends and one declares his love; but the other is straight, it should be made clear in the logline because that is the hook. If this is a story about a boy and a girl who are friends and one declares his or her love, then the logline needs a hook, it needsRead more
If this is a story about two guys who are friends and one declares his love; but the other is straight, it should be made clear in the logline because that is the hook.
If this is a story about a boy and a girl who are friends and one declares his or her love, then the logline needs a hook, it needs that one extra thing to reel the reader in.
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