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  1. Posted: March 2, 2017In: Drama

    After his daughter is diagnosed with a rare cancer, a timid college professor and his jailbird uncle start a prostitution service in order to pay for her experimental treatments.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 3, 2017 at 8:06 am

    The problem ?I see with ?your concept ? in terms of gay ?prostitution is that it's a young guy's trade. ? The most desirable "bun boys" and "rent boys" are just that, young men. ? Women have the "benefit" of a wider ?age spectrum, more years, into which to ply their trade. ?There is a market for 30+Read more

    The problem ?I see with ?your concept ? in terms of gay ?prostitution is that it’s a young guy’s trade. ? The most desirable “bun boys” and “rent boys” are just that, young men. ? Women have the “benefit” of a wider ?age spectrum, more years, into which to ply their trade. ?There is a market for 30+ women, ?MILF’s and cougars. ?The market for ?30+ ?men ?is ?small, a niche market.

    The story concept of straight middle-aged males servicing women — as you noted, that’s already been done (more than once)

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  2. Posted: March 1, 2017In: Drama

    A post-Christchurch earthquake troubled teenager faces the choice of remaining in her accident-induced coma and the fantasy world she has created, or finding a reason to return to her beloved broken city.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on March 2, 2017 at 6:44 am

    Agreed with DPG. I'll add that the wording needs to change as it is unclear and therefore confusing. I suggest changing the opening clause to: In a post-earthquake Christchurch a comatose teen must...

    Agreed with DPG.

    I’ll add that the wording needs to change as it is unclear and therefore confusing.

    I suggest changing the opening clause to:

    In a post-earthquake Christchurch a comatose teen must…

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  3. Posted: March 1, 2017In: Drama

    An indigenous ward of the state is released from juvenile prison and fostered to a reputable white family who threaten to lie to his parole officer and get him incarcerated, unless he helps them with a heist.

    benny Logliner
    Added an answer on March 1, 2017 at 7:35 pm

    You both raise good points thank you.

    You both raise good points thank you.

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