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An invasion, a young western king, the birth and fall of a mega city.
"An invasion, a young western king, the birth and fall of a mega city." This doesn't describe a plot. It seems to list a few events in a story. It seems like this invasion is the inciting incident, so what does this king have to do in result of that? The last part may be a part of the script, but itRead more
“An invasion, a young western king, the birth and fall of a mega city.”
This doesn’t describe a plot. It seems to list a few events in a story. It seems like this invasion is the inciting incident, so what does this king have to do in result of that? The last part may be a part of the script, but it is likely it has no place in the logline, but I can’t really give my opinion on that bit until I have more information, a clear plot, a clear object goal.
See lessLess than a year after being raped by her owner, a 14-year-old slave girl is a reluctant mother to an infant. When given the opportunity to escape, she’s forced to either bond with the child, or abandon it in the desert.
>>>abandon it in the desert.What is the general setting? Where does this take place? When?And loglines are not about characters being trapped between the horns of a dilemma, having to make a difficult choice. Loglines are about , the choice made and the action that follows.
>>>abandon it in the desert.
What is the general setting? Where does this take place? When?
And loglines are not about characters being trapped between the horns of a dilemma, having to make a difficult choice. Loglines are about , the choice made and the action that follows.
See less3rd try after the appreciated feedback: A man must trace a Mesoamerican heirloom into Brazilian jungle to discover the truth behind his father’s death, and win his true love.
How about adding an inciting incident which will match the action of the movie. "After his explorer father is murdered, a sleazy lawyer must trace his only clue, a mysterious Brazilian relic, into the Amazon to discover who or what killed his father."
How about adding an inciting incident which will match the action of the movie.
“After his explorer father is murdered, a sleazy lawyer must trace his only clue, a mysterious Brazilian relic, into the Amazon to discover who or what killed his father.”
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