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When a feisty child psychologist fights the system to save a haunted boy, she?s fired but what she discover changes them all.
Agreed with DPG.The story seems to start after she is fired - this is her inciting incident. You could make her resulting goal to get her job back and her motivation to save the haunted boy.
Agreed with DPG.
The story seems to start after she is fired – this is her inciting incident.
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When during a famine a loving Eskimo grandmother is abandoned by her migrating family, she reflects on her past life and faces inevitable death.
Agreed with Richiev and DPG, reflecting on its own is not an action fit for a film, the MC needs to pursue a specific outer goal. Could the grandmother want to break with tradition and fight for survival on her own?
Agreed with Richiev and DPG, reflecting on its own is not an action fit for a film, the MC needs to pursue a specific outer goal.
See lessCould the grandmother want to break with tradition and fight for survival on her own?
An Iraqi war vet, who discovers he was not born American, is caught by ICE. They promise him citizenship if he helps bring down a syndicate of birth certificate forgers. . But they renege and deport him to Guatemala, where gangs chase him on a harrowing journey back to the US to reunite with his family.
TGS: Thanks for the clarification. ? ?Have you considered writing a script based upon or at least "inspired by" a real veteran's struggle to get back to the US and win legal status after he has been deported??Or if you prefer to pursue a fictional character and story line than I suggest he not justRead more
TGS:
Thanks for the clarification. ? ?Have you considered writing a script based upon or at least “inspired by” a real veteran’s struggle to get back to the US and win legal status after he has been deported?
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Or if you prefer to pursue a fictional character and story line than I suggest he not just be an Iraqi vet — but a decorated vet, one who served with valor and distinction. ?This instantly makes him a more sympathetic character.
fwiw
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