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  1. Posted: May 4, 2017In: Drama

    A young man who’s a first generation Mexican-American citizen falls in love with a beautiful Syrian refugee, their love Must overcome her strict Muslim family and all the cultural gaps between their two worlds…

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    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 4, 2017 at 12:28 pm

    I think the love story with the cultural gap cliche won't be enough for a whole feature these days. Suggest even another antagonistic character or force introduced along with the culture divide. I mean, cultures co-exist all the time these days and frankly, the premise is getting a wee old, imo.

    I think the love story with the cultural gap cliche won’t be enough for a whole feature these days. Suggest even another antagonistic character or force introduced along with the culture divide. I mean, cultures co-exist all the time these days and frankly, the premise is getting a wee old, imo.

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  2. Posted: May 2, 2017In: Drama

    A color blind pianist makes it rain every time he plays his symphonies. One melody at a time, he fills colors in the lives of people who listen to him play. On his last show, he mistakenly opens the door to his painful past. If the show must go on, he has to face his demons and let the light prevail.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on May 3, 2017 at 12:37 pm

    If you shorten the logline and give specifics it improve this logline. Also, i don't understand how 'colorblind' correlates to music. However, If he was deaf I would understand who it could affect the story,

    If you shorten the logline and give specifics it improve this logline.

    Also, i don’t understand how ‘colorblind’ correlates to music. However, If he was deaf I would understand who it could affect the story,

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  3. Posted: May 2, 2017In: Drama

    A 45 year old homemaker finds herself on the verge of an ugly divorce. With her estranged relationships and a broken heart, she tumbles further down when is left bereft of an alimony. To leave behind rock bottom, she must discover herself and start a new life.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on May 3, 2017 at 12:35 pm

    "Left destitute by her ex-husband, a homemaker must enter the workforce for the first time and learn to become self sufficient if she is to survive."

    “Left destitute by her ex-husband, a homemaker must enter the workforce for the first time and learn to become self sufficient if she is to survive.”

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