Sign Up Sign Up

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sign In Sign In

Forgot Password?

If you'd like access, Sign Up Here

Forgot Password Forgot Password

Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.

Logline It! Logo Logline It! Logo
Sign InSign Up

Logline It!

Logline It! Navigation

  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
  • Buy Feedback
  • Blog
Search
Post Your Logline

Mobile menu

Close
Post Your Logline
  • Signup
  • The Logline Generator
  • Search Loglines
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Blog
  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
  • Buy Feedback
  • Blog
  • Recent Loglines
  • Most Answered
  • Reviews
  • Feedback Wanted
  • Most Visited
  • Most Voted
  • Random
  1. Posted: July 5, 2017In: Drama

    A young guy starts an small scale enterprise instead of going with the regular job after his graduation, but as his enterprise starts making profits he realizes the large scale enterprise wants to crush his firm.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on July 9, 2017 at 1:15 pm

    Agreed with the above, a lack of detail and goal make this logline fall short of its calling. As with your other loglines, best you study the 'Formula' tab to learn more about loglines.

    Agreed with the above, a lack of detail and goal make this logline fall short of its calling.

    As with your other loglines, best you study the ‘Formula’ tab to learn more about loglines.

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  2. Posted: July 5, 2017In: Drama

    A young man and a woman are chosen by nature to give birth to the 10th Avatar of lord Vishnu i.e. the Kalki Avatar. But before that they have to undergo 10 severe tests set by the nature to make them strong and worthy of the task.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on July 9, 2017 at 1:13 pm

    So is the story about them pushing through the trials in the lead up to the 'grand shtup'? Or is it about them being selected for the 'big bonk' and accepting the challenges it intails? Or is the story going to cover them being selected, going through the trials, hanky-panky, and give birth? It sounRead more

    So is the story about them pushing through the trials in the lead up to the ‘grand shtup’? Or is it about them being selected for the ‘big bonk’ and accepting the challenges it intails? Or is the story going to cover them being selected, going through the trials, hanky-panky, and give birth?

    It sounds like the most interesting part is them facing the trials together – it’s the part of the story that has the most obstacles for them to overcome.

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  3. Posted: July 5, 2017In: Drama

    On the eve of 100 years of Indian Cinema – a film receives an award for being the best Hindi film of the century, but no one claims the award. Intrigued by this fact, an enthusiastic film journalist embarks on a journey to find out what happened to the maker of this classic Through this journey he realizes what hardships, sufferings, and pains went in making that film.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on July 9, 2017 at 1:02 pm

    Agreed with Dkpough1, the premise stretches believability. Perhaps you could specify the writer or director as the central enigmatic character who faild to show? More so, the reason for the journalist to find the missing person/persons needs to be more compelling. To raise the stakes, could they havRead more

    Agreed with Dkpough1, the premise stretches believability. Perhaps you could specify the writer or director as the central enigmatic character who faild to show?

    More so, the reason for the journalist to find the missing person/persons needs to be more compelling. To raise the stakes, could they have been a familymemberr of the journalist?

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp

Sidebar

Stats

  • Loglines 8,027
  • Reviews 32,212
  • Best Reviews 629
  • Users 3,806

Try the Logline Generator

aalan

Explore

  • Signup
  • The Logline Generator
  • Search Loglines
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Blog

Footer

© 2012–2026 Karel Segers. All Rights Reserved
With Love from Immersion Screenwriting.