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When their squad car crashes in no-man?s land, a small-town cop and a convicted murderer find themselves handcuffed together, and trapped in a battle for survival.
In addition to dpg's point, we can surmise that the handcuffed aspect stands out in this log. That's good. How important it is to even ?mention it in the log is debatable. I think you should focus on the environment the MC finds himself in. No man's land can be improved upon, as well as what cop andRead more
In addition to dpg’s point, we can surmise that the handcuffed aspect stands out in this log. That’s good. How important it is to even ?mention it in the log is debatable.
I think you should focus on the environment the MC finds himself in. No man’s land can be improved upon, as well as what cop and convict are running away from to ultimately survive. Here is a chance to suggest what this story could truly offer, including something ironic.
The intimacy of being together for a majority of the story, and a cop then having to save his prisoner or rely on him or her for help should be expected, as well as the stakes.
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Good suggestions from Richiev. What about the inciting incident being that her business goes belly up? ?She feels she's a life failure. ?All that discipline, self-sacrifice and self-denial ?has accomplished nothing.
Good suggestions from Richiev.
What about the inciting incident being that her business goes belly up? ?She feels she’s a life failure. ?All that discipline, self-sacrifice and self-denial ?has accomplished nothing.
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Agreed with the above. Best to redraft this so it reads clearly and focuses on one main character.
Agreed with the above.
Best to redraft this so it reads clearly and focuses on one main character.
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