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When a young party-girl?s father is framed and imprisoned, she must find the evidence to clear him and fool social services into believing she?s responsible enough to care for her little brother.
Age answer...She's 17. Absolutely AWESOME feedback. Thank you all for taking the time to?read it. One goal it is. Now I don't need to fit as many words?into my logline. It's a win, win! ?I love this service. Very grateful. :D
Age answer…She’s 17. Absolutely AWESOME feedback. Thank you all for taking the time to?read it. One goal it is. Now I don’t need to fit as many words?into my logline. It’s a win, win! ?I love this service. Very grateful. 😀
See lessTo begin a new life after a suicide attempt, an orphaned girl, who is afraid of the outer world, with a stranger’s help moves to a big city and begins interacting with people.
Agreed with DPG.Also, the first few clauses are backstory, good for the synopsis but redundant in the logline. Focus the next version on the sequence of events that occur after she gets to the city.
Agreed with DPG.
Also, the first few clauses are backstory, good for the synopsis but redundant in the logline. Focus the next version on the sequence of events that occur after she gets to the city.
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Yes Nir has made a good suggestion. Police kill people all the time. Hence constant protests in the USA. Earlier this year an Aussie woman in America called the Police for help and was gunned down by the cops, oops, forgot to put my camera on.... Australia is perhaps the safest place on earth. I havRead more
Yes Nir has made a good suggestion.
Police kill people all the time. Hence constant protests in the USA. Earlier this year an Aussie woman in America called the Police for help and was gunned down by the cops, oops, forgot to put my camera on….
Australia is perhaps the safest place on earth. I have worked in Law Enforcement, I know there is corruption in all organisations. It’s naive to think otherwise.
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