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Being held responsible for the death of the tiger she took care of, a scared single mother has one chance to save her job as a zookeeper: to tame an untamable tiger.
??That, and the fact that she has no money, would make it a disaster if she loses her job??I disagree ? You lose a job so you tighten the ol? buckle spend less and get another.Your response indicates that you are entirely set on this as your story, yet the rhetoric in most of the comments you?ve recRead more
??That, and the fact that she has no money, would make it a disaster if she loses her job??
I disagree ? You lose a job so you tighten the ol? buckle spend less and get another.
Your response indicates that you are entirely set on this as your story, yet the rhetoric in most of the comments you?ve received is that the premise is flawed and would benefit from change. Study all the comments you?ve already gotten and consider making some fundamental changes to the concept.
See lessWhile digging a murdered girls grave, the church hired hand unearths a bible from 1500 BC and he soon come to grips that it’s the only one written that?has the 11th Commandment and Honor Thy Children and in an instant is transformed to protect all children or die trying.
Considering that this in the action category, it really doesn't suggest any action other than spiritual. Shouldn't the holy experience persuade the hunter to seek justice against the murderous one(s)?
Considering that this in the action category, it really doesn’t suggest any action other than spiritual. Shouldn’t the holy experience persuade the hunter to seek justice against the murderous one(s)?
See lessA religious psychopath working as a TV medium gets conflicted when a dead cardinal begs him to spare his bastard daughter, the psychopaths’ female co-worker.
It's a bit like American Psycho: 'A wealthy New York investment banking executive hides his alternate psychopathic ego from his co-workers and friends as he delves deeper into his violent, hedonistic fantasies. " Seeing this logline there is no clear plor description too.And no clear stakes either.Read more
It’s a bit like American Psycho:
‘A wealthy New York investment banking executive hides his alternate psychopathic ego from his co-workers and friends as he delves deeper into his violent, hedonistic fantasies. ”
Seeing this logline there is no clear plor description too.And no clear stakes either.
But I agree with that there is no clear plotdesciption. The word that stands for the plot description is “Conflicted”Should he still kill her now he nows her dead father is/was a cardinal. I mean?the psycho ?being religious.
“who’s daughter?”–the dead cardinal’s daughter.
“Why female? ”
Yes, I thought about a love interest. She loving him.
See lessThe stakes:?the cardinals daughter?not be killed by the psycho.