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  1. Posted: October 16, 2017In: Drama

    When two inmates realise that no one is on their side, together they must navigate an uneasy friendship to set each other free.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 17, 2017 at 9:26 am

    I sense this has the makings of an Odd Couple-Buddy film.? ?However:>>>realise that no one is on their sideThat's hardly headline news, a shocking basis for an inciting incident. Prisons are a Hobbesian hell of all against all and every man for himself.Nor does that tell us how that translaRead more

    I sense this has the makings of an Odd Couple-Buddy film.? ?However:

    >>>realise that no one is on their side

    That’s hardly headline news, a shocking basis for an inciting incident. Prisons are a Hobbesian hell of all against all and every man for himself.

    Nor does that tell us how that translates into the specific and imminent danger they face they band together to escape.? I guess they’re about to be killed.? But I shouldn’t have to guess.? The logline should say so.

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  2. Posted: October 14, 2017In: Drama

    She ran away from the sharecropping life she was born into, and pursued her dream of becoming a Blues musician. This is the story of Blues Legend: Memphis Minnie.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on October 14, 2017 at 8:17 pm

    Is there something specific that made her need to run away?If nothing specific, is there anything you know about her life that you could embellish into the event??Lastly, can you define "...becoming a blues musician..."? In other words, it could help if the logline had a specific goal that will emboRead more

    Is there something specific that made her need to run away?
    If nothing specific, is there anything you know about her life that you could embellish into the event??

    Lastly, can you define “…becoming a blues musician…”? In other words, it could help if the logline had a specific goal that will embody her as a blues musician. What was her break out gig that put her on the world stage?

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  3. Posted: October 10, 2017In: Drama

    Three small town teens fight to maintain their moral compass while surviving in a fading community. (Episodic Series)

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    Added an answer on October 12, 2017 at 8:14 am

    I can see how that could appeal to young people. With that said, I would make it something geared towards that target audience. The problem with this idea is that you just about described most teenagers. Now that you have the main setting of your story, you need to add an interesting hero. The fadinRead more

    I can see how that could appeal to young people. With that said, I would make it something geared towards that target audience. The problem with this idea is that you just about described most teenagers. Now that you have the main setting of your story, you need to add an interesting hero. The fading community could perhaps be the antagonist. But we as an audience need to be given someone we can root for. Why should we root for these people. Who are they? Give us an answer to that question, add stakes, and push them to their limit to get us interested. Make them HAVE TO do something. We need a reason to sit through this story.?

    Based on the ideas that you come up with you’ll be able to?decide if this idea has enough creative content to produce?an episodic series. It may be better suited for a 2-hour movie.

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