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When a passionate biker girl’s entry to participate in a Motorcycle trip was denied on basis of her gender : She refuses to put off this apparent set back- and holding firm to the credo, embarks on a most chaotic and hilarious journey of her life ,Solo monumental motorcycle odyssey from American West coast to East coast to create history in the “Motorcycle Hall of Fame”.
As Foxtrot25 said.? At 66 words in length too long and convoluted to evaluate as a logline.I think there is the seed for an interesting America Odyssey story here with a female protagonist (for a change). So I want to -- but I am not (yet) enticed -- to ride along on this one.My concern is the crediRead more
As Foxtrot25 said.? At 66 words in length too long and convoluted to evaluate as a logline.
I think there is the seed for an interesting America Odyssey story here with a female protagonist (for a change). So I want to — but I am not (yet) enticed — to ride along on this one.
My concern is the credibility of the inciting incident that kick starts the story.? While there remain bumps, grease slicks, ruts and speed traps of male chauvinism among bikers, I am not aware that the gender issue is generally an insurmountable obstacle to riding with a pack that it once was.? As any attendee or spectator at the Rolling Thunder and Sturgis rallies can attest. What is the time period for this story?
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I just want to say that I have learnt so much from all your reviews.? I am happy to submit this log line to the next part of my project of writing a screenplay for my feature film. This has been an excellent opportunity to do this. Thank you all again for your time and professional experience.??ByeRead more
I just want to say that I have learnt so much from all your reviews.? I am happy to submit this log line to the next part of my project of writing a screenplay for my feature film. This has been an excellent opportunity to do this. Thank you all again for your time and professional experience.??Bye for now!
After a mental breakdown a young Maori corporate?leaves the wealth and returns home to the land of his spiritual roots, to re-discover that he must never abandon his cultural identity. ?
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It has clarity and interesting plot points. I'd try to smoothen it out a bit and maybe shorten it as well. I don't care for the "however" transition within the logline.
It has clarity and interesting plot points. I’d try to smoothen it out a bit and maybe shorten it as well.
I don’t care for the “however” transition within the logline.
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