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When terrorists kill the best friend of Elliot Ross, a troubled Yeshiva-grad, he must decide between building a future with the girl of his dreams, or seeking out revenge on those he deems responsible, even if it means losing it all.
Agreed with the above notes. I'd also remove the Yeshiva description - it adds little to the plot. He can indeed be a Yeshiva grad in the script but for the logline purposes, it is less relevant. If anything I'd describe his character as an academic in this way his obstacle will be greater. That saiRead more
Agreed with the above notes.
I’d also remove the Yeshiva description – it adds little to the plot. He can indeed be a Yeshiva grad in the script but for the logline purposes, it is less relevant. If anything I’d describe his character as an academic in this way his obstacle will be greater. That said I’m not sure how a religious studies graduate will actually be able to catch the bad guys – what skills does he have that enable him to complete his mission?
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>>>Then you?re into a period piece, which would cost loads more to makeGood point, Foxtrot25.? However,1] You're into a period piece anyway setting the story beginning in 1975 -- more than 40 years.? Which means it's going to cost more.? Granted not cost as much as setting it in WW2, but...Read more
>>>Then you?re into a period piece, which would cost loads more to make
Good point, Foxtrot25.? However,
1] You’re into a period piece anyway setting the story beginning in 1975 — more than 40 years.? Which means it’s going to cost more.? Granted not cost as much as setting it in WW2, but…
2] How are you going to persuade the audience that the women deserve recognition if you don’t show what they did to deserve it?? Like the movie “Hidden Figures”.? It didn’t focus on the struggle of Black women to gain recognition for their contribution to the US space program decades later.? The movie shows them in that time period struggling to achieve and win respect and recognition.
Show, not tell.? That’s the best way to tell a film story,? persuade a movie audience.
See lessAn Israeli locksmith entangled in a turf war manipulates Google advertising to build a mobile empire from a call center in his living room.
Agree with Fandango, This is missing so much. It is also too small to be a feature film. Why would an audience care if the Israeli locksmith succeeds or not?
Agree with Fandango,
This is missing so much. It is also too small to be a feature film. Why would an audience care if the Israeli locksmith succeeds or not?
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