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When a starry-eyed, awkward girl is stabbed protecting the object of her unrequited love, her beloved?s cowardly behaviour compels her to look for another boyfriend?based on more than just good looks.
After the lead dumps her rotten boyfriend, and before the main plot begins you should have a few scenes where she awkwardly tries dating on her own. 1: She tries sexting a guy (PG13) video tapes herself dancing in her underwear... it goes live to all her friends 2: She gets set up on a blind date: HRead more
After the lead dumps her rotten boyfriend, and before the main plot begins you should have a few scenes where she awkwardly tries dating on her own.
1: She tries sexting a guy (PG13) video tapes herself dancing in her underwear… it goes live to all her friends
2: She gets set up on a blind date: He turns out to be 70 and keeps falling asleep at the restaurant. (“You’ll love him, he’s a Marine veteran…” fails to say it was the Korean war)
3: She tries online dating only to accidentally get on the wrong site and her match turns out to be a very butch lesbian. (Only works if the lead is straight)
4: She tries a singles group at her church… Her mom is there, and her mom has better luck than she.
That is when out of the blue, she gets a number or sees a commercial or a friend tells her about… What ever your hook is. (The matchmaker who has never failed to produce a match)
See lessWhen a fashion designer finds herself falling in love with a entrepreneur suffering from PTSD, she must find a way to get through him to love and trust her from a repetitive past that hurt him in the first place.
When you say "must" in a logline, you should give us the "Or else"If there is no "or else, I would take out the "must" and re-word it.
When you say “must” in a logline, you should give us the “Or else”
If there is no “or else, I would take out the “must” and re-word it.
See lessA lonely computer programmer, looking for Mr. Right, must find a way to regain access to the empathetic AI, she inadvertently created, which the government has quarantined and designated a security risk.
For me. You need to tie Mr Right and the AI together. Replace the words and think how it reads. I want to find a Lion so I go and retrieve my lost dog from the pound. These may be related but how. Answer that ?why? and you are on the start of a good rewrite.
For me. You need to tie Mr Right and the AI together.
Replace the words and think how it reads. I want to find a Lion so I go and retrieve my lost dog from the pound. These may be related but how.
Answer that ?why? and you are on the start of a good rewrite.
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