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  1. Posted: February 19, 2018In: Drama

    An OCD-afflicted photog wins over an energetic creative through her awkward yet relentless affection, but as their relationship develops, it becomes too much.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on February 20, 2018 at 10:42 pm

    Good points and examples by Nir.A character who suffers from OCD at the beginning of a film will also suffer from it at the end no matter how the story ends? -- there's no character arc to be had on that character issue.? It's a cognitive disorder that a character cannot intentionally "overcome".? HRead more

    Good points and examples by Nir.

    A character who suffers from OCD at the beginning of a film will also suffer from it at the end no matter how the story ends? — there’s no character arc to be had on that character issue.? It’s a cognitive disorder that a character cannot intentionally “overcome”.? However, he may use his disorder to rationalize morally reprehensible behavior, to con others (and? himself) into excusing his? bad decisions.? And that rationalization/con is the raw material for a character arc.

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  2. Posted: February 20, 2018In: Drama

    An old man lives alone in a cemetery , he just asks passenfers for a hug but nobody cares apart from some immigrants.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on February 20, 2018 at 12:38 pm

    This logline lacks all the major elements that are needed to describe a plot. Perhaps read a few other posts on the site to glean more about logline conventions in general and plot structure in particular. Needless to say, check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar first.

    This logline lacks all the major elements that are needed to describe a plot. Perhaps read a few other posts on the site to glean more about logline conventions in general and plot structure in particular. Needless to say, check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar first.

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  3. Posted: February 17, 2018In: Drama

    A young, pregnant Maltese woman struggles to survive the siege of Malta and Nazi invasion alone, after her submariner husband leaves during WWII. OR When newlyweds Jaynie and Reggie are separated during the siege of Malta WW2, an impulsive, pregnant Jaynie must survive and save her family without him.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on February 19, 2018 at 9:30 am

    What does "...struggles to survive..." mean? What does she actually do? Also, what are the stakes? Is she Jewish? The Nazi invasion is a good backdrop, but how does their presence on the Island directly threaten her?

    What does “…struggles to survive…” mean? What does she actually do?

    Also, what are the stakes? Is she Jewish? The Nazi invasion is a good backdrop, but how does their presence on the Island directly threaten her?

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