Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
Does my logline work, is it clear and show the character, event, and action.
When she ordered by a judge to move in with her estranged father and his family in Bel-Air, a street wise black teenager girl from the ghetto must overcome prejudice and ignorant stereotypes.I might be wrong, but to me Compton California is more ghetto than suburbia. I like the idea that a judge onRead more
When she ordered by a judge to move in with her estranged father and his family in Bel-Air, a street wise black teenager girl from the ghetto must overcome prejudice and ignorant stereotypes.
I might be wrong, but to me Compton California is more ghetto than suburbia.
See lessI like the idea that a judge on the recommendation of DCS is forcing both the teenager and the estranged /absent father to forge a new relationship.
Patrick, who has struggled with the demon dyslexia all his life, finds himself at crossroads when he meets a young gang member who is trapped in the same vicious cycle.
While it's good that you have a name for the character, it does little to describe the character to the audience. How has struggling with dyslexia affected him as an individual? How does it affect his interactions with others? Beyond that, the protagonist needs an action. He needs something to do.
While it’s good that you have a name for the character, it does little to describe the character to the audience. How has struggling with dyslexia affected him as an individual? How does it affect his interactions with others?
Beyond that, the protagonist needs an action. He needs something to do.
See lessBased on Actual Events: Guilty of accidentally killing a black postal worker, a tobacco salesman politically awakens after his acquittal by a white court in Apartheid South Africa and joins a resistance group only to be caught, tortured and exiled for planning a terrorist attack against the regime.
Yep, good comments - the missing point here is that the protagonist was actually guilty of manslaughter
Yep, good comments – the missing point here is that the protagonist was actually guilty of manslaughter
See less