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  1. Posted: June 23, 2018In: Drama

    A young boy attempts to rise the ranks as a grandmaster chess player, but his goals are thrown off when his mentor intervenes out of jealousy.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on June 24, 2018 at 5:38 am

    As variable said.? To say that his "goals are thrown off"? is to portray him as weak and the victim of the mentor.? This logline conveys the impression that the mentor takes control of the driver's seat and steers the plot. A protagonist must be protrayed as?proactive,? as someone who is in the drivRead more

    As variable said.? To say that his “goals are thrown off”? is to portray him as weak and the victim of the mentor.? This logline conveys the impression that the mentor takes control of the driver’s seat and steers the plot. A protagonist must be protrayed as?proactive,? as someone who is in the driver’s seat of the plot? and never surrenders it no matter who opposes him or what the? major obstacle is .

    Also “thrown off” is weak and vague.? Be specific.? How does the mentor sabotage his career?

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  2. Posted: June 23, 2018In: Drama

    A young boy in high school and his goofy uncle, a washed-up actor, try and become the next big stand-up comedy duo.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on June 23, 2018 at 2:16 pm

    It's a pretty cool premise. What must the young boy in high school and his goofy uncle overcome to become the next big stand-up comedy duo? Or out of what sympathetic necessity? Good Luck!!

    It’s a pretty cool premise. What must the young boy in high school and his goofy uncle overcome to become the next big stand-up comedy duo? Or out of what sympathetic necessity?
    Good Luck!!

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  3. Posted: June 14, 2018In: Drama

    A doll maker that got blessed because he can reunites with his kid..

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    Added an answer on June 15, 2018 at 10:52 pm

    You stated a character here. Have you seen Dead Silence (horror movie). Thats a movie with the same chracter (devil one).You need to put a logline where a reader can feel your whole concept and the movie.Again you put this in drama. It can be a fantasy or horror. And your name, I think it is spelledRead more

    You stated a character here. Have you seen Dead Silence (horror movie). Thats a movie with the same chracter (devil one).

    You need to put a logline where a reader can feel your whole concept and the movie.

    Again you put this in drama. It can be a fantasy or horror. And your name, I think it is spelled as ‘Prathama’????????

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