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Logline problems
Is it some kind of reverse of The Notebook? I like the idea, but you need to flesh out the concept more. If he is an amnesiac or suffer from Alzheimer's, should he really live on his own? Maybe having them live in a medically assisted resort make more sense. I am assuming that she knows that he is hRead more
Is it some kind of reverse of The Notebook?
I like the idea, but you need to flesh out the concept more.
If he is an amnesiac or suffer from Alzheimer’s, should he really live on his own? Maybe having them live in a medically assisted resort make more sense.
I am assuming that she knows that he is her husband. Why does she not tell him?
When a lonely and suicidal man falls in love with his elderly neighbour, he has 30 days to convince her to leave the euthanasia centre with him.
He committed himself to the euthanasia centre that has a policy of 30 days before helping you commit suicide. During the course of the 30 days, he meet the elderly neighbour who told him that she is here because of her husband. Of course, never told but the viewer will assume that the husband is dead. She gave him back the lust for life. He then tries to convince her to leave the facility with him. We then learned that she is his wife. She was at the facility to accompany him, not as part of a suicide pact.
See lessAn aging writer struggles to prove his worth by crafting the perfect logline but quickly spirals out of control when a brain tumor compels him to endlessly edit a single idea.
Sounds a bit like a French film. They can show the same thing over and over and make it work. Perhaps the hint of an outcome? But otherwise I can see the story.
Sounds a bit like a French film. They can show the same thing over and over and make it work.
Perhaps the hint of an outcome? But otherwise I can see the story.
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Think goal. After getting help for her son only to find he is getting worse a Mum ..... but ....... That sort of thing. But if getting help is half the story? Look for the one thread that ties the two halves and use that.
Think goal.
After getting help for her son only to find he is getting worse a Mum ….. but …….
That sort of thing.
But if getting help is half the story? Look for the one thread that ties the two halves and use that.
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