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Not sure what to put in this field not seeing it active in other loglines published
It's an interesting concept and I can see you have a good idea on what you want your screenplay to be about. However, the length can be shortened and you have some unnecessary details that you don't have to squeeze in there. Also, I'm looking at it and can't seem to figure out your main goal for youRead more
It’s an interesting concept and I can see you have a good idea on what you want your screenplay to be about. However, the length can be shortened and you have some unnecessary details that you don’t have to squeeze in there. Also, I’m looking at it and can’t seem to figure out your main goal for your protagonist. Is it to protect himself and his mother or face the issue head on?
See lessWhen a neglected daughter is adopted by a wealthy and powerful man, she must fight her reckless, power hungry mother to keep her new world from falling apart.
Agreed with all the above. Also, in what way will her world fall apart? The term is too vague to work well in a logline. Describe one SPECIFIC and clear danger the mother poses and use that to establish the stakes.
Agreed with all the above.
Also, in what way will her world fall apart?
See lessThe term is too vague to work well in a logline. Describe one SPECIFIC and clear danger the mother poses and use that to establish the stakes.
A couple of cynical fixers from different ends of the political spectrum exploit a series of grisly killings that take place during an increasingly bitter election campaign.
Truth is stranger than fiction.? And more interesting.? I just don't see anything in this logline that can top what is currently going on in American politics.? ?(I presume the story in set in the US of A.) fwiw
Truth is stranger than fiction.? And more interesting.? I just don’t see anything in this logline that can top what is currently going on in American politics.? ?(I presume the story in set in the US of A.)
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