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A disgraced sports pundit with gambling debts and having suffered memory loss, fights to stop a recurrent nightmare from becoming reality. He dreams of becoming a gambler and wasting his life.
After I read this, I am wondering, What does the reader know? And when do they know it? How much of the 'memory loss' is known to the reader at the beginning of the story?
After I read this, I am wondering, What does the reader know? And when do they know it?
How much of the ‘memory loss’ is known to the reader at the beginning of the story?
See lessAfter he is forced to go to rehab, the son of a Mafia Don gets into a relationship with an alcoholic cop and must keep her from finding out he is in the mafia while also keeping his relationship secret from the family.
Or comedy? Don't underestimate the power of comedy.
Or comedy?
Don’t underestimate the power of comedy.
See lessNew to a civilian world, an ex soldier freshly divorced from an abusive marriage, is forced to live with his PTSD twin sister while trying to build a business to pay the bills.
The PTSD sister is a complication, not an antagonist unless she is actively trying to stop him from achieving a goal. As Richiev suggests, helping her seems to be the goal, but I feel like there's a twist missing from the story that would make it more interesting. Just for example, if he took over hRead more
The PTSD sister is a complication, not an antagonist unless she is actively trying to stop him from achieving a goal. As Richiev suggests, helping her seems to be the goal, but I feel like there’s a twist missing from the story that would make it more interesting. Just for example, if he took over his sister’s store and discovered?a local gang is extorting it, it would not only be one way to explain her PTSD but defeating them would also give him a more concrete goal than just “building a business.”
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