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When a wallflower is tired of being overlooked and underestimated, she sets out on a journey of self-discovery to come off the wall and out of her shell.
This is a classic story, I think you need to add how this story is different to the logline. What's unique about your version of this story?
This is a classic story, I think you need to add how this story is different to the logline. What’s unique about your version of this story?
See lessVisited by the ghost of the 1940?s Hollywood icon she?s about to portray, a movie star journeys back in time to get her part right and get her Oscar.
Sounds like the lead character found a solution to her problem. The lead wants to win an Oscar and so she travels back in time to observe the real icon in action... problem solvedSo where is the conflict?What stands in the leads way?I only ask this because adding the main conflict of the story willRead more
Sounds like the lead character found a solution to her problem. The lead wants to win an Oscar and so she travels back in time to observe the real icon in action… problem solved
So where is the conflict?
What stands in the leads way?
I only ask this because adding the main conflict of the story will strengthen your logline.
See lessWhen a starry-eyed wallflower lands the coveted role in a theatre production of the Heroines of Greek Tragedy, she must step out of the chorus line and out of her shell and into the spotlight.
One other thought/question:? what are the stakes?? Why must she stop being a wallflower? What's so wrong with being a wallflower?? Not everyone can be the life of the party, the center of attention, the flaming extrovert.? Not everyone wants to be. And there is as much to be said against being a narRead more
One other thought/question:? what are the stakes?? Why must she stop being a wallflower?
What’s so wrong with being a wallflower?? Not everyone can be the life of the party, the center of attention, the flaming extrovert.? Not everyone wants to be.
And there is as much to be said against being a narcissist who craves to? be in the spotlight 24/7 as the wallflower who cravenly hugs the wall 24/7.
What is the tangible/visible penalty or loss if she fails to perform in the spotlight?? ?What is the tangible/visible reward or payoff if she succeeds?
And as Art House flicks usually have a more sensible take on human nature, sometimes a brutally? honest pov on life, how realistic is it to be believe that a couple of hours in the spotlight can cure? the “character flaw” of being a wallflower?
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