1. Posted: July 29, 2019In:

    When his only friend goes missing under mysterious circumstances, a psychotically depressed teenager decides to become a superhero in order to find him.

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    >>> depression-induced psychosis Hmm.? The standard clinical symptom of psychosis is a loss of contact with reality.? Which might induce someone to think he can be a superhero.? But it would also render him unable to deal with the real world,? hence, unable to accurately observe and processRead more

    >>> depression-induced psychosis

    Hmm.? The standard clinical symptom of psychosis is a loss of contact with reality.? Which might induce someone to think he can be a superhero.? But it would also render him unable to deal with the real world,? hence, unable to accurately observe and process clues? to solve the mystery of his friend’s disappearance.? Or do much of anything else to function and survive in the real world.

    So is this the story of a teenager who thinks he can become a superhero and solve the mystery — but he’s deluded; he can’t do either because of the nature of his mental disorder?? Or is this an origin story for a new superhero?? And if the latter, then the story belongs in the superhero genre.? And if the latter what are the latent powers that he will develop that makes him different from all the other superheros?? What is his special gift?

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  2. Posted: July 28, 2019In:

    When his only friend goes missing under mysterious circumstances, a suicidally depressed teenager tries to become a masked vigilante in order to find him.

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    A vigilante is someone who takes it upon himself to punish someone else being a criminal.? But the logline says? his friend died under mysterious circumstances.? So how can he be a vigilante if the circumstances are mysterious, if he doesn't even know his friend's final fate or who is responsible??Read more

    A vigilante is someone who takes it upon himself to punish someone else being a criminal.? But the logline says? his friend died under mysterious circumstances.? So how can he be a vigilante if the circumstances are mysterious, if he doesn’t even know his friend’s final fate or who is responsible?? Wouldn’t it be more accurate to say the teen becomes his own private investigator?? In which case, why does he need to wear a mask?

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  3. Posted: July 28, 2019In:

    After her fathers’ death, a guilt-ridden athlete hires a hitman to execute her own murder? to pay off the family debt but struggles with the consequences of her deadly decision after meeting an inquisitive kid.

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    dpg Singularity

    I can understand why she would grieve the death of her father, but why is she feeling guilty?? ?And what's prevents her from calling off her executioner?? ?And she if she couldn't pay off the debt, where did she get the money to hire the hit man?

    I can understand why she would grieve the death of her father, but why is she feeling guilty?? ?And what’s prevents her from calling off her executioner?? ?And she if she couldn’t pay off the debt, where did she get the money to hire the hit man?

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