1. Posted: August 14, 2019In:

    England 1962. Two teenage sisters, sibling rivals who argue over everything, go to an all-night party that launches their career as pop singers. Will they rocket to stardom or fizzle out like a defective cherry bomb?

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    jaheagle Logliner

    Thanks fwiw. It is actually both. It's about trying to make it as a pop-singing duo, and running into personal problems that may derail their goal. I'll give you "the Coppola" technique a try.

    Thanks fwiw. It is actually both. It’s about trying to make it as a pop-singing duo, and running into personal problems that may derail their goal. I’ll give you “the Coppola” technique a try.

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  2. Posted: August 4, 2019In:

    A jaded billionaire and business executive sends an amateur reporter on a wild goose hunt, only to have the reporter uncover a dark decade long conspiracy with the executive at the center of it.

    jaheagle Logliner

    I agree with the two previous reviews. I don't understand why the billionaire sends the amateur reporter on a wild goose hunt, especially when he knows he is at the center of a decade-long conspiracy that he wants to keep secret.? Does the billionaire have a relationship with the reporter? Did the rRead more

    I agree with the two previous reviews. I don’t understand why the billionaire sends the amateur reporter on a wild goose hunt, especially when he knows he is at the center of a decade-long conspiracy that he wants to keep secret.? Does the billionaire have a relationship with the reporter? Did the reporter come to the billionaire first, and the billionaire tries to misdirect the reporter’s quest?

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  3. Posted: July 19, 2019In:

    After a series of career setbacks, a washed-up singer visits her former longtime partner to fix their careers, only to find out he wants to quit.

    girlbad Penpusher

    I like this idea. I don't find the meditation cliched. Success is relative. I would like to know more about this story.

    I like this idea. I don’t find the meditation cliched. Success is relative. I would like to know more about this story.

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