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  1. Posted: September 8, 2019In: Drama

      A young girl overcomes obstacles in her life to become the first native African to win Miss World.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 8, 2019 at 12:52 pm

    It would help if there was a specific obstacle she must overcome. What is the main conflict?

    It would help if there was a specific obstacle she must overcome.

    What is the main conflict?

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  2. Posted: August 28, 2019In: Drama

    When Raju accidentaly falls into an abandoned deep tube well, chaos ensues as all efforts to rescue him seem to fail and the only thing he has to hold on to is hope.

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    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on September 8, 2019 at 12:20 am

    "When he falls into an abandoned well breaking his leg, a teenager must rescue himself or die from exhaustion."(A movie like 148 Hours, Open Water, Gerald's Game, Gravity, and Frozen, where the protagonist is the trapped one.)Or:"When an abandoned well collapses on a young boy, a firefighter's teamRead more

    “When he falls into an abandoned well breaking his leg, a teenager must rescue himself or die from exhaustion.”

    (A movie like 148 Hours, Open Water, Gerald’s Game, Gravity, and Frozen, where the protagonist is the trapped one.)

    Or:

    “When an abandoned well collapses on a young boy, a firefighter’s team must save him before he suffocates.”

    Here, the protagonist is the rescuer.

    You can choose to show both sides and that is ok, although more challenging (dual protagonist).

    Why does “chaos ensue?” It’s often tempting to blur the story’s specifics by resorting to generic and clich? expressions. This is bad writing, first of all because it impedes our thinking. When we write the story, at one point or another we will have to come up with specific events. Thus, let’s cut to the chase:

    Why can’t they take the boy out? Has the well collapsed on top of him? Is there a flood? Decide what the big obstacle is and put it in the logline.

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  3. Posted: September 1, 2019In: Drama

    After her mother loses her battle with cancer, a grief stricken 13-year-old girl loses her faith in God and contemplates suicide.

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    Sdewitt Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 7, 2019 at 11:27 pm

    Thank you both!

    Thank you both!

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