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A modern retelling of Sophocles’ tragedy Oedipus Rex with a twist. – EDDIE WRECKS – When an arrogant basketball star goes back to his dingy hometown to attend the funeral of his estranged mother, he ignores the plight and warning of his loved ones leading him to the devastating realization that at one time he inadvertently had sex with father and he is the perpetrator of his mother’s murder.
This is an awesome concept, I would love to watch this! The logline sounds very tragic and sophisticated. I would shorten it slightly to something like this: 'An arrogant basketball star returns to his dingy hometown to attend? the funeral of his estranged mother. He ignores the warnings of his loveRead more
This is an awesome concept, I would love to watch this! The logline sounds very tragic and sophisticated. I would shorten it slightly to something like this: ‘An arrogant basketball star returns to his dingy hometown to attend? the funeral of his estranged mother. He ignores the warnings of his loved ones, leading to the devastating realization he may equate into his mother’s suicide.’
See lessA young girl, obsessed with designing a robot that will replace her dead mother, learns that she has been chosen to compete at an International Robotics Meet, in the first all girls team. But when her grandmother is diagnosed with Alzheimers she must choose between the obligations of her traditional Sri Lankan family and her own dreams.
This concept is great, though your logline is much too long. Here's an example of how you could shorten it: 'Accepted into a competition testing her engineering prowess, a young girl must decide whether or not to abandon her team and put aside her obsession of creating a replacement mother for herseRead more
This concept is great, though your logline is much too long. Here’s an example of how you could shorten it: ‘Accepted into a competition testing her engineering prowess, a young girl must decide whether or not to abandon her team and put aside her obsession of creating a replacement mother for herself, after her grandmother falls ill.’
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I love the concept, though the first two sentences could be condensed while still giving all the same info essentially. Perhaps try something along the lines of: 'Humanity has evolved to a point where pregnant women always carry multiple children, and only the best sibling will live.' For your finalRead more
I love the concept, though the first two sentences could be condensed while still giving all the same info essentially. Perhaps try something along the lines of: ‘Humanity has evolved to a point where pregnant women always carry multiple children, and only the best sibling will live.’
For your final sentence, I would drop the lead’s name, change ‘love interest’ to ‘woman he loves’,? and ‘selected as the weaker one’ could be shortened to ‘deemed unworthy (or weak).’
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