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When a high school reunion brings together a group of female friends, they use the night to complete their unfinished and outdated high school bucket list before they part ways again.
kcguru: Another thought. If it's an ensemble story you want to tell (versus focusing on one main character) than the bucket lists can't be all about doing the same thing.? Ensemble plots work best when they involve stories told in counterpoint, that is, with complementary and contrasting story threaRead more
kcguru:
Another thought. If it’s an ensemble story you want to tell (versus focusing on one main character) than the bucket lists can’t be all about doing the same thing.? Ensemble plots work best when they involve stories told in counterpoint, that is, with complementary and contrasting story threads playing off each other and? oriented around one central theme.
One too-obvious story thread is about a character who takes a risk or breaks a rule she didn’t have the guts to take as a teen.? Okay, but that would be more effectively told if played against a story thread about a character who had the guts to take all kinds of risks, break all the rules in high school — and now she wants to make amends for the damage her reckless behavior caused.
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One little thing that may add is to specify what his wife's company is - for example - is it some sort of feminine manufacturing product, or cleaning service or something that would also conflict with his conception of being a man. Otherwise, sounds like a good idea.
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