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When a veteran and a rookie contract killer takes a shortcut, it results in killing the wrong guy for a mafia kingpin. They race against time as they try to replace the intended target with another body before ending up next on the hit-list: A real killer story.
The intended target is still alive. So how will replacing the body of wrong victim with the body of another wrong victim change the situation? How will that fool the mafia kingpin? And who is the protagonist, the pov character, the veteran or the rookie?
The intended target is still alive. So how will replacing the body of wrong victim with the body of another wrong victim change the situation? How will that fool the mafia kingpin?
And who is the protagonist, the pov character, the veteran or the rookie?
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What is the ultimate goal of the lead character? What defines success? Also why two lead characters? You describe them as the same, they are both incompetent, drunken corporate video producers. If they are the same why not have one lead character? If they are different (In a way that will create conRead more
What is the ultimate goal of the lead character? What defines success?
Also why two lead characters? You describe them as the same, they are both incompetent, drunken corporate video producers. If they are the same why not have one lead character? If they are different (In a way that will create conflict) you should indicate that in the logline.
See lessAn arrogant crime scene cleaner and her impressionable partner/best friend begin a messy murder spree to provide the work that’ll save their business from going under.
From a logline perspective, I think it is all there.
From a logline perspective, I think it is all there.
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