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When a gang member’s girl scout kid sister threatens to disown him after he was convicted for vandalism yet again, he promises to help her make the entire town litter-free during his remaining days of freedom.
This is much stronger in my opinion. I would consider doing a bit of an American History X type thing, where the kid sister is maybe caught tagging her school or something and the protagonist doesn't want her to follow his path. Maybe he barely speaks to his parents because of his criminal activitieRead more
This is much stronger in my opinion.
I would consider doing a bit of an American History X type thing, where the kid sister is maybe caught tagging her school or something and the protagonist doesn’t want her to follow his path. Maybe he barely speaks to his parents because of his criminal activities but he tries to meet up with his sister without them knowing because they really don’t approve and believe he will lead her down the same path. On the flip side, maybe his parents ignored him when his baby sister came along. This would give more scope for conflict externally and internally.
Either way, it’s definitely getting there. I can see this as a Dramedy so I reckon you could have it in either Comedy or Drama and it would work.
See lessUpon being diagnosed with lung cancer, a lifetime litterbug tries to make the world beautiful for his depressed granddaughter before he dies.
I love the goal, it makes for a very innocent and kind-hearted story, especially with two people that seem to be in quite hopeless situations. Not sure how it’s a comedy due to the utter hopelessness of the protag and his granddaughter, unless it’s a black comedy which could be fun.
I love the goal, it makes for a very innocent and kind-hearted story, especially with two people that seem to be in quite hopeless situations. Not sure how it’s a comedy due to the utter hopelessness of the protag and his granddaughter, unless it’s a black comedy which could be fun.
See lessWhen a non-verbal young chef learns that her signature dish has been ripped off by a rival, she must win over a new elite clientele with her intuitive understanding of flavour and micro-dosing.
Again: what are the stakes? She must win over a new elite -- or else. And what is the obstacle that stands in her way? If she's already established her reputation with one smash hit, what's so hard about winning her clientele back , or a building a new one, with another dish?
Again: what are the stakes? She must win over a new elite — or else.
And what is the obstacle that stands in her way? If she’s already established her reputation with one smash hit, what’s so hard about winning her clientele back , or a building a new one, with another dish?
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