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  1. Posted: April 7, 2021In: Comedy

    A closed-off artist tries to leave her old life behind without attachments, when an anonymous one-night stand goes hilariously wrong and the protective wall around the painful memory, isolating her, begins to crack.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 8, 2021 at 1:03 am

    Your artist has issues, but I am unable to glean why she’s hurt – thus I cannot fully grasp her psychology. Why was this one-night stand hilarious? It reads like this one-nighter positively impacts her life, but I am unable to connect how this stranger helps her “tear down the wall”. BTW: An artist’Read more

    Your artist has issues, but I am unable to glean why she’s hurt – thus I cannot fully grasp her psychology. Why was this one-night stand hilarious? It reads like this one-nighter positively impacts her life, but I am unable to connect how this stranger helps her “tear down the wall”.

    BTW: An artist’s medium speaks volumes e.g. While bodypainting a nude model thing’s get hot – you get the idea.

    Hope you find this constructive, take care.

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  2. Posted: January 13, 2021In: Comedy

    a pair of stubborn biracial twin brothers on a run after robbing a casino in Vegas, flee to their home, new York to start a new life, but discover the trouble they left in Vegas, didn’t stay in Vegas

    masundbe Penpusher
    Added an answer on January 26, 2021 at 9:38 pm

    Gangster flicks are always awesome. This longline feels al little muddled though...To me, what happens in New York is the important bit. What does the "trouble they left in Vegas" do to them? Kidnap their mom? Burn down their pizza joint? That's the stuff that gets them to re-examine their past andRead more

    Gangster flicks are always awesome. This longline feels al little muddled though…To me, what happens in New York is the important bit. What does the “trouble they left in Vegas” do to them? Kidnap their mom? Burn down their pizza joint? That’s the stuff that gets them to re-examine their past and face up to the consequences of their actions.

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  3. Posted: January 14, 2021In: Comedy

    After robbing a casino in Vegas, a pair of stubborn biracial twin arrive in New York to start a new life, they discover the trouble they left in Vegas, didn’t stay in Vegas.

    sabrown Penpusher
    Added an answer on January 15, 2021 at 4:58 am

    I like it!!!! I was immediately intrigued and wanted to know what trouble followed them from Vegas.

    I like it!!!! I was immediately intrigued and wanted to know what trouble followed them from Vegas.

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