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Three non-criminals out of pocket and out of luck hold up a convenient store to earn some much needed money.
The above review is true - there are no stakes here. ?Out of money, aren't we all? ?What makes them different? ?Also, I would avoid "non-criminals". ?(Maybe upstanding citizens?) ?When I read it, my eyes only saw criminal, so I thought it's just three criminals holding up a convenience store. ?It soRead more
The above review is true – there are no stakes here. ?Out of money, aren’t we all? ?What makes them different? ?Also, I would avoid “non-criminals”. ?(Maybe upstanding citizens?) ?When I read it, my eyes only saw criminal, so I thought it’s just three criminals holding up a convenience store. ?It sounds a little like The Full Monty, a movie that I love. ?And the friends all had different reasons for doing what they did. ?If we know their motivation, we can forgive their bad deed. ?More irony and a little more insight into why they need this money would go a long way. ?Keep us posted?
See lessWhen the most sought after celebrity becomes a widow, a beauty underdog beats the odds to marry him after unwittingly impersonating royalty and struggles to conceal her secret from the media.
Hello Karel You're right. ?By the way, the story is mostly about the struggle to get married. I fix?this.
Hello Karel
You’re right. ?By the way, the story is mostly about the struggle to get married. I fix?this.
See lessWhen a business graduate of the new generation wants some money for his new business he is up against the best and wins.
Yep, I agree with the comments above and also I would say that the stakes and conflict seem a bit lacking. Granted you say he / she goes up against the best, so we assume they are tough opposition, but saying "he wins" makes it seem it is actually very easy. He also doesn't seem to have anything toRead more
Yep, I agree with the comments above and also I would say that the stakes and conflict seem a bit lacking.
Granted you say he / she goes up against the best, so we assume they are tough opposition, but saying “he wins” makes it seem it is actually very easy. He also doesn’t seem to have anything to lose.
A recent business graduate, whose family name has granted him an easy life,?is given a week by his father to beat 10 of the best business graduates from around the world at a series of academical challenges if he is to be handed the family company.
That isn’t the best, but we get an idea of the character flaw : He has has had and easy life and is perhaps self entitled, the stakes: The company and his father’s respect, a ticking clock: A week, and the Opposition: The 10 Graduates.
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