1. Posted: January 22, 2016In:

    In the world where there is no positivity but only negativity. A young man who’s had enough of it go out on an adventure to find the last positive man on earth. And bring back the positivity to world.

    Richiev Singularity

    Why? What triggers this quest?

    Why? What triggers this quest?

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  2. Posted: January 20, 2016In:

    When an underachieving gravedigger’s cemetery is taken over by his ex-girlfriend’s Mafioso father, he must rise to the occasion to regain control or end up losing more than just his job.

    dpg Singularity

    Just because he's a gravedigger doesn't mean he's the owner, in control of the cemetery.? Most gravediggers are just employees. And in this version, the chain of ?cause-and-effect between the ex-girlfriend and the jeopardy to the you man's life has been broken.? Why does being an ex-boyfriend of a gRead more

    Just because he’s a gravedigger doesn’t mean he’s the owner, in control of the cemetery.? Most gravediggers are just employees.

    And in this version, the chain of ?cause-and-effect between the ex-girlfriend and the jeopardy to the you man’s life has been broken.? Why does being an ex-boyfriend of a girl who father is a mob man put the young man’s life in danger?

    The stakes are clear — his life is at stake — but “regain control” is vague as an objective goal?? What is his?objective goal — what must he specifically do ?to save his life?

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  3. Posted: January 16, 2016In:

    A first date goes from zero to one hundred with an evening in a theme park. Sydney becomes the backdrop as the couple explore the city, doing and talking about everything you shouldn?t on a first date.

    FFF Mentor

    Hello, for me this logline is too vague even for a mumblecore movie. A boy meet a girl, they talk. Where's "the thing" ? I suggest you to try to write the logline for "before sunrise" and "midnight kiss", try to analyze those movies and find what makes them interesting.

    Hello,
    for me this logline is too vague even for a mumblecore movie.
    A boy meet a girl, they talk. Where’s “the thing” ?
    I suggest you to try to write the logline for “before sunrise” and “midnight kiss”, try to analyze those movies and find what makes them interesting.

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