1. Posted: April 20, 2016In:

    When a traitor agent quits and takes their biggest star to a competitor, the staff of “UNDERDOGS”, a boutique Talent Agency for Dogs: its owner, a bellicose no-nonsense New Yorker; a casting director, a debonair bitter out of place old-timer; and a casting agent, an aspiring actress more interested to getting cast herself than casting man’s best friends, scramble to find a replacement for a huge German Beer commercial; if they don’t, their agency will go to dogs. In the ensuing pandemonium a receptionist sees a big opportunity for his poodle. But will the Germans accept a French Poodle as a substitute of Saint Bernard and will the French Poodle be able to overcome his stage fright? The “Underdogs” better find out the answers soon, because the German patience is running thin and they are that close to kissing “Underdogs” Auf Wiedersehen.

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    FFF Mentor

    Hello, this could be a funny movie but as a logline... I suggest you to read some logline tutorials like the training page on this very website or anythink you trust on google.

    Hello,
    this could be a funny movie but as a logline… I suggest you to read some logline tutorials like the training page on this very website or anythink you trust on google.

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  2. Posted: April 19, 2016In:

    A Talent Agency for Dogs struggles to find a dog for an important German beer commercial.

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    If it is an ensemble try something like: A boss mid divorce, a secretary who wants to come out and a cast director who wants to quit struggle with their problems and trying to find a dog for a massive beer advert. Not great but how I may approach it.

    If it is an ensemble try something like:

    A boss mid divorce, a secretary who wants to come out and a cast director who wants to quit struggle with their problems and trying to find a dog for a massive beer advert.

    Not great but how I may approach it.

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  3. Posted: April 15, 2016In:

    Davis Scott, a quirky southern photographer, and her band of off the wall thirty something friends struggle to survive unwanted dick pics, getting spat on during a date, and ridiculous pick up lines in order to find love in the jungles of Los Angeles.

    dpg Singularity

    >This is a logline for a sitcom pilot. Oh. Nir Shelter is certainly right that you will have to produce a pilot script to sell the series and that script needs to introduce interesting and conflicted characters & relationships & set up a dramatic problem that promise plenty of ?interestinRead more

    >This is a logline for a sitcom pilot.

    Oh.

    Nir Shelter is certainly right that you will have to produce a pilot script to sell the series and that script needs to introduce interesting and conflicted characters & relationships & set up a dramatic problem that promise plenty of ?interesting stories week in week out. ?Consider the logline for the highly acclaimed and highly rated series, “Breaking Bad”:

    When a milquetoast chemistry teacher is diagnosed with terminal cancer, he starts cooking crack to pay for his medical bills and provide for his wife after his death.

    And that’s just for the pilot episode. ?In 28 words it sets up a ?problem for the main character that promised plenty of complications and conflicts in ensuing episodes. ?And delivered for 62 episodes.

    I think your logline has one essential ingredient that promises plenty of comedy– the social milieu of contemporary L.A. ? But consider the real possibility that you are not the only writer developing a comedy series that promises plenty of comedy about 20/30-something women ?pursuing love in a modern urban social environment. Like L.A. ?What is there about your concept as evidenced in the logline ?for a pilot script that makes it stand out from all the rest?

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