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Childhood friends William and Tucker think they’ve both been hired at a Chicago lifestyle magazine, when only one job materializes and is given to William, rather than tell the truth, William signs his friend up to participate in a social experiment pretending it’s an undercover story for the magazine.
This doesn't read as an industry conventional logline, therefore it will likely not serve as a good pitching tool. It's also confusing and fails to describe a clear plot, and as a result won't be good for use in drafting?a synopsis. As advised above best you read through the Training tab on the topRead more
This doesn’t read as an industry conventional logline, therefore it will likely not serve as a good pitching tool. It’s also confusing and fails to describe a clear plot, and as a result won’t be good for use in drafting?a synopsis.
As advised above best you read through the Training tab on the top bar for more information on how to best write a logline.
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Best if you look at the ideal structure for a logline at the 'Training' tab on the top bar. A few points to get you started though: Less is more - 30 words or under are ideal lengths for loglines. Best to describe a plot as appose to only the emotional stakes for a character, this means an event thaRead more
Best if you look at the ideal structure for a logline at the ‘Training’ tab on the top bar.
A few points to get you started though:
Less is more – 30 words or under are ideal lengths for loglines.
Best to describe a plot as appose to only the emotional stakes for a character, this means an event that starts the story and a goal.
See lessThe spawn of a nasty divorce, an arrogantly argumentative teen attends a new school. When senior pranksters torment him, he forms his own clique to counterattack their antics.
The back story description in the logline is unnecessary. Here it is again with out the backstory: After senior pranksters torment him, a troubled teenager forms his own clique to counterattack their antics.This is missing a description of how he intends to counterattack, in other words the goal shoRead more
The back story description in the logline is unnecessary.
Here it is again with out the backstory:
After senior pranksters torment him, a troubled teenager forms his own clique to counterattack their antics.
This is missing a description of how he intends to counterattack, in other words the goal should be described in the logline. Perhaps even describe in more detail the specifics of his public humiliation so we better understand his motivation for revenge, in other words clarify what the inciting incident actually was.
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