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  1. Posted: June 23, 2016In: Comedy

    Clumsy kid learns to dance to stand up to bully and impress bully’s ex-girlfriend at school dance.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 24, 2016 at 8:41 am

    In the movie 'ANGUS' the mean kids, as a joke, rig an election so that Angus will have to dance with the prettiest girl in school (The girl he has a crush on) in front of everyone. He is scared because he doesn't know how to dance. So in this scenario learning to dance and 'getting the girl' sort ofRead more

    In the movie ‘ANGUS’ the mean kids, as a joke, rig an election so that Angus will have to dance with the prettiest girl in school (The girl he has a crush on) in front of everyone. He is scared because he doesn’t know how to dance. So in this scenario learning to dance and ‘getting the girl’ sort of go hand in hand.

    I believe you are trying to say the same thing. The lead character must lean to dance, get the girl.

    I would simply try another logline attempt that’s more clear. Maybe add a few specifics.

    Good luck, your story sounds interesting

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  2. Posted: June 23, 2016In: Comedy

    Selfish athlete learns the importance of humility when he falls for a single mom while rehabbing an injury as his team makes playoff push.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on June 23, 2016 at 4:27 pm

    I think you're trying to make it seem as if his love for the woman will prevent him from partaking in the playoff. To that matter he needs to choose between real love or his sports career, as DPG mentioned it needs to be explained why and how the love and career are related or how they connect, coulRead more

    I think you’re trying to make it seem as if his love for the woman will prevent him from partaking in the playoff. To that matter he needs to choose between real love or his sports career, as DPG mentioned it needs to be explained why and how the love and career are related or how they connect, could it be that she was a nurse or physiotherapist at the rehab centre?
    This way his sports bought him to meet his love but his love is taking him away from the sport.

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  3. Posted: June 21, 2016In: Comedy

    A pert casino waitress accidentally tripled in stature by a scientist achieves her dream of Vegas stardom and falls in love wuth him, but sacrifices her size to save him when he’s kidnapped by a mobster. .,

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    Added an answer on June 23, 2016 at 8:37 am

    See the screenplay ar http://filmfreeway.com/projects/476988

    See the screenplay ar http://filmfreeway.com/projects/476988

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